- Jacob Miller
- Palm Bay, FL
- United States
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Poetry : A Dialogue?
If you like poetry or writing please post something. My idea is to have a conversation but not a convential one I guess.If anyone has thoughts on anyone elses work then share it as you see it. The goal is that real substantial dialogue can come out of the absract. Sometimes the best ideas and insights are the ones you were not expecting. Don't be shy, everyone is nervous about sharing and breaking that down is the first part. Speaking of nervous here is one of mine.
on the moon-
and on the moon -by the moon
you fade away into stirring sentiments
and little boys mouths
who open to you like some unknown thing
and little boy tongues pant for you
And little boys mouths
little sticky tongues taste and see that the lord is good
and open into the perfect night
into a strangers embrace
fade into the perfect cloud
covering the perfect moon
Closing Statement from Jacob Miller
Just wanted to thank everyone for sharing your work and also a part of yourself. It is a brave and selfless thing to do and I was honored to be a part of it!
Love,love,love-that is the soul of genius
Thanks for being brilliant!!